Another short story. This time in English

I actually wrote this one when I was 12 years old
When I found it on my laptop again I couldn't stop laughing at all the mistakes in it
Let's just say it was horrible  
So I corrected everything and I hope it's readable now

Despite the bad writing I really love this story
Especially the ending
I wrote it, but it still gets me every time ^^

I'd love to have some critique on this to get better in writing stories